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Stuck in the Darkness, Darker than night
A hand reached out to show him the light
Eternally loyal to the master he serves
Finally getting the life he deserves
Zabuza had an icy-cold heart
But Haku was the one with which he couldn't part
To the very end, they were like father and son
Even though they lost, in their hearts they really won
Peacefully resting, finally free
They left their world happily
©2006-2009 *Zet206
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Author's Comments

Ok, so my English teacher asked us to write a 10 line poem about someone or something negative, but the poem had to make them sound possitive. So, I wrote about Haku from Naruto. I'm only putting it up because and told me to :P That's right, I'm blaming this on you Kaitlin and Alex -_-

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:icontomblily393:
Thats very beautiful
:iconzet206:
thankyou :D

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:iconsariachan-kokirileaf:
Shouldn't it be "night" instead that "light", at the end of the first line?
Anyway, I like this lil poetry about Haku. :)


P.S. Thanks for the fave! ^^

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:iconzet206:
oh yrah ^^; opps! I'll go fix that

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Don’t cry,
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I’m singing to you
'cause I know what you’ve been through and now
Not so long ago I felt the same
<3
:iconkiana7w:
you're amazing at writing poems

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:iconzet206:
thank you :)

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Don’t cry,
Open up your eyes and know
There's someone else out there that feels this way

I’m singing to you
'cause I know what you’ve been through and now
Not so long ago I felt the same
<3

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